See the moment
When she reaches out to you
Grab her hand
Pull her close
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Take the chance
Make a stand
Show her the truth
In your words
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For the moment
This is your chance
The key is ready
Waiting in her hands
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
She’s already fallen
She sees the hope
It lingers
After you speak
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
She sees your heart
It slowly shows
In the only way
Hers will know
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See the fire
She’s built it
Just for you
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
For a time
It slowly burns
Steady
On low
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The choice is yours
You can take her hand
Tell her how you feel
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Just let the truth
Fan the flame
Magic growing
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Or stand choosing
Letting the fire die
As you watch
Your dream
Walk away
Hesitation and fear combine to make a lonely existence. Nicely done!
all it takes is that one moment, that leap of faith. brilliant poem!
Well done. Really enjoy the images of opportunity and seizing the moment. I appreciate how you offer an image and resolve it a few stanzas later, like fire, then later fan the flame. Thanks, enjoyed 🙂
Be brave…go for it…let love show you the way.
Nice Rally entry!
what a shout out,
powerful word flow.
enjoy the rally.
🙂
Great.. 🙂
nicely done!
Beautiful. Cut deep too. You either make a stand, or you walk. A lovely flow also.
Enjoyed this much 🙂
Let love not pass by
There for the taking if only quick enough! Lovely little poem… and I love these comment bubbles!!
Beautifully, I really wish more people would take a chance on love, its certainly worth risks
let love win,
grin…
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