http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/poetry/
“Thanks Jingle!!”
With a smile
And just a look
All of a sudden
My heart was hooked.
I knew so little
Yet felt so much
Always marveling
At my reaction
To your touch
For this mystery
I was ill prepared
My mind racing
With thoughts of you
I am baffled
At what I should do
I now see
That I can’t dissect
The mystery
Of what you’ll do next
So just for now
I will wait
Just take my time
To see if this is fate.
Interesting way to approach this topic of fate…enjoyed reading your poem.
well captured emotions.
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Thanks and I nominate SLP – his Obituary Poem was fantastic !!
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Fate is certainly a strange thing. Nice one.
You’ll find mine here.
Sweet, really– I love an ambiguous love poem– nicely done!
http://mairmusic.wordpress.com/
You nailed this one for sure — the feelings and passion and the fate that we tend to move too quickly when our hearts are ablaze — and need to take a step back and wait to see if it is “fated” Nice — I have to remember this one words of wisdom written here.
Came by jingles Thursday first time here — will be back to read some more
Joanny
you got it……….great match of words………profound thinking……..!!!
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