Mystery or Fate


http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/poetry/

“Thanks Jingle!!”

With a smile

And just a look

All of a sudden

My heart was hooked.

I knew so little

Yet felt so much

Always marveling

At my reaction

To your touch

For this mystery

I was ill prepared

My mind racing

With thoughts of you

I am baffled

At what I should do

I now see

That I can’t dissect

The mystery

Of what you’ll do next

So just for now

I will wait

Just take my time

To see if this is fate.

12 thoughts on “Mystery or Fate

  1. slpmartin says:

    Interesting way to approach this topic of fate…enjoyed reading your poem.

  2. Jingle says:

    well captured emotions.

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  5. anthonynorth says:

    Fate is certainly a strange thing. Nice one.
    You’ll find mine here.

  6. mairmusic says:

    Sweet, really– I love an ambiguous love poem– nicely done!
    http://mairmusic.wordpress.com/

  7. joanny says:

    You nailed this one for sure — the feelings and passion and the fate that we tend to move too quickly when our hearts are ablaze — and need to take a step back and wait to see if it is “fated” Nice — I have to remember this one words of wisdom written here.

    Came by jingles Thursday first time here — will be back to read some more

    Joanny

  8. Moeed's Diary says:

    you got it……….great match of words………profound thinking……..!!!

  9. Jingle says:

    http://itistimetothinkformyself.blogspot.com/2010/05/55-here-is-whats-coming-in-mind.html

    help me achieve 55 comments goal by leaving a comment under the post…
    take the awards from previous post after that.
    thank you in advance.

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